Creative writing

In English we have been doing creative writing we started the topic by going into groups and brainstorming about one of the words creative or writing (my group got writing). we also went on Padlet about what makes creative writing good here is the link.  then we learned about  Haikus and we made some. then we learned about Sensory language and this is the paragraph that I wrote "The sky turned blood red as the crowd cheered. Almost everyone had come to see the head fall, we were so tightly packed that I was shoulder to shoulder with everyone else. I could already smell the blood, it was so strong I could almost taste it." all in all it was fun but I would have preferred to have been able to write what ever we wanted to more (we only did it once).

this week we have been doing things to help us to start a novel we did things like show don't tell and narrative opens at first we just went for it and I wrote these: The lake was crystal clear she loved coming here. she came here a lot after her parents died they had come here as a family. now five years on she still loved it,

I live in a ghost town most people would shudder at the thought of living there I know I did when I was alive that is but I am not and so I live here. But the strangest thing happened earlier today a human someone who was really alive came into town,

June 24 3018: I woke up to a whole new world to the one I thought I had just left first off there were flying cars and flying houses to be honest with you I thought I was dreaming I mean 1 second ago I was in a hospital in 2018 and now I am here I found out afterwards that it was the year 3018 so now I guess I have to adapt to my new life.

(sorry about my punctuation or just the quality) then we added action to it: Mary loved the idea of seeing a ghost town everyone had heard about them and most people were terrified of going there even to visit and now she was walking into one had the sircatanses been different she would have been jumping for joy but she was running for her life so no time to feel excited she had been warned that her uncle was going to kill her but she couldn’t believe it why would he do it what was there to gain but it turned out to be true so Mary fled she had heard of a ghost town a good day's ride on horseback so she went there knowing that no one would dare coming there so she was safe for now and that is how she ended up here the town looked good it was clean and well kept which Mary thought was rather odd as no one had lived there for centuries. Mary couldn’t shake the feeling that she was being watched that she had disturbed something which she unknowingly had for she thought like everyone else in her village that it was a ghost town because no one lived there but it was in fact a ghost town because it was a town just like her own but ghosts lived there and they were terrified they had never seen a living person in there town before some of them had been dead for so long that they had almost forgotten what it was like to be alive so to see a living person was a huge shock so they were hiding and watching to see what this person with there horse would do. By this time the sun had started setting so Mary hurried to find a place to stay for the night she edvensuly found a house that was a little run down but she liked it and it looked like no one lived there. It smelled a little musty but it would do. When sleep finally came to Mary the ghosts came out to see what had invaded there home one of the braver ghosts (and one on the newest) went closer than everyone else dared.

(sorry if it is a bit long and boring) then we made a charter here is the slide show I made it on 

I really enjoyed doing this because I can do what ever I want.