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Wednesday, 9 May 2018

Are kids addicted to their phone?

In social study's we have been talking about kids being addicted to their phones so I wrote a paragraph about it I did get a bit carried away sorry but I hope you will get what I am saying.


Lots of children today are addicted to their phones. I think this is because they do so much on them I have a friend who says their life on their phone. Also people nowadays get their first phone really young sometimes four years old now what is a four year old going to do with a phone and it is also a touch screen. So I think they are addicted because it is all they have ever had they have had them since they are little so they do everything on them and they can’t bear to lose it and that is a bit sad but it is not just kids adults have the same problem. But anyway that is why I think people are addicted to their phone.

I didn't say this in my paragraph because it was getting a bit long but adults have the same problem but every one is looking at the kids your parents tell you to go out side a get off your phone wile they are on their phone so I think we should look at the adults as well.

here is an other one I wrote which might be a bit better
I think most students are addicted to their phone. This is a problem because they are not paying attention in class and they are just in their own little world. Steve Gardiner says that most teenagers can’t go 57 minutes without looking at their phone it is like their security blanket. even in my class wile we have been talking about this at least 3 people were on their phone and that was all that got caught it it just really sad because they are not paying attention in class so they don’t learn. But I also think that it is mean to say everyone is addicted because that is not true only about 75% of teenagers are addicted. And that is why I say most students are addicted to their phone.

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